Salt Song at Hyde Park Cinema

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Photo by Lizzie Coombes.

Ben Fincher (@BenCVTW) reviews Salt Song, Hyde Park Picture House, Sept 5th …

As omnipresent and supranational as the oceans themselves, the sea permeates every cultural medium. What is it about the sea which people find so evocative? Does it tie people together, or separate them?

Imperceptible from around the corner of the Hyde Park Picture House, where Salt Song was performed, the locally iconic cinema instantly immersed me in the seaside atmosphere I remember from the trips to the coast in my youth. Little portions of fish and chips were given out; a magician performed an illusion for me that I still cannot comprehend; an effusive fortune-teller it was impossible not to grin at delighted the crowd; there was a sandpit with buckets and spades; musicians played shanties and pier-end standards like ‘Oh I Do Like to be Beside the Seaside’; and perhaps the fortuitous contribution of a sunny day with a warm breeze, these elements very quickly made me forget that I was standing on a street corner in Leeds, miles from the sea.

As I and the rest of the audience took to our seats, the sight and sound of the tide lapping against the shore on the screen, I contemplated Blackpool, Scarborough, Brighton, Whitby, the bite of the salt in the sea breeze, candy floss and kitschy arcades. I was ready to remember. Then the performance started.

Merging live music, projected imagery of the sea and coastal towns, spoken and sung poetry and a touch of dance, the format of Salt Song was fresh and engaging. By having normally quite distinct and demarcated forms of performance come together, the show was an experience quite dissimilar from anything else I had seen, a sort of ‘concept gig’ where each element contributed toward a narrative but also a feeling, an emotional state. The multi-format presentation was an exciting way to portray some of these, and I’d love to see more work which combines forms of performance like Salt Song did. The problem is in balance, and getting these elements to each contribute their fair share.

Sharply contrasting with the joyous interactive pavement scene, the first parts of the show are melancholic, lovelorn poetry about a couple separated by the ocean – too soon for such material in my opinion. Instead of showing different facets of the space the sea occupies in human consciousness, it just left me feeling a bit glum. That’s not to say that that Rommi Smith’s poetry wasn’t good, or that I could write anything better. There were in fact some very beautiful and moving passages. I just felt that the emotional rollercoaster had taken an unexpected vertical drop.

The overarching plot of Salt Song is of a swimmer seeking to forget the traumatic separation from her partner, in parts told through the lens of a chorus of mermaids who discover a discarded letter in the wind. The combination of spoken and sung poetry works very well, and the librettists’ vocal talents are indisputable, but I can’t help but feel that using something as emotive and symbolically multifaceted as the ocean through a love story was an easy option. Being stonehearted and cynical, I don’t find stories about peoples’ romantic lives very moving, so maybe I’m missing the point.

Dave Kane conducting for Salt Song at Hyde Park Picture House 5 September 2013. Photo by Lizzie Coombes for Imove.
Dave Kane conducting for Salt Song at Hyde Park Picture House 5 September 2013. Photo by Lizzie Coombes for Imove

Dave Kane’s compositions work beautifully as a component of Salt Song, and I would argue is the strongest element in the show. Though the band was small, the score showed great depth and was always engaging. Having an ‘orchestral indie’ vibe, in parts it reminded me of The Decembrists, particularly the cacophonous degeneration of Oh I Do Like to be Beside the Seaside. Other parts were reminiscent of DeVotchKa. Led predominantly by cello and double bass, it suited the poetic and visual imagery in the show well, and the musicians absolutely had the talent to do it justice.

The visual aspect of the show, shot in Anglesey, Leeds, Scarborough and Sicily, varied in quality, being at its best towards the end in the sequences I strongly suspect were shot in Sicily. Perhaps this trip consumed a large part of Salt Song’s budget, but I can’t picture why in earlier parts of the show a repeating slideshow of about a dozen images of Scarborough (I am sure the slideshow is a default screensaver on Apple Mac computers which draws from the computer’s ‘My Pictures’ file) was used as part of a professional production for a paying audience. There are times, too, when aging filters not unlike the sort used on Instagram are applied to clearly contemporary footage. Some of the footage is beautifully shot – a scene with foreboding shots of a grey sea floor intercut with flashes of a swimmer at sunset was of cinematic quality – and the lower quality parts let the better ones down.

Salt Song uses the canvas of the ocean to paint a picture of human emotion, which is as changeable as the tides. I could write at length about the symbolism evoked. Of course salt is a major theme and metaphor, the substance having such an extensive roster of vital uses throughout human history, from a flavouring to its use as wages (hence salary) during the days of the Roman Empire. So too does the historical sea-bound departure of men to fight in distant wars, from the Peloponnesian ship battles in the Mediterranean Sea, to the D-Day landings on the coast of France, on our own English Channel. Though far from untapped, the sea is a powerful motor of passion, both joy and anguish. Ultimately, I felt that Salt Song’s combination of sensory ingredients was an enchanting recipe that needed just a touch of seasoning.

5 comments

  1. Hi Ben. Thanks for reviewing the show. As the filmmaker of the project i feel compelled to respond to a couple of your assumptions.
    Firstly, you are correct that some of the footage was shot in Sicily (on the islands of Ciclopes that Odesseus had his run in with Polyphemus) but my trip there did not consume a single penny of the Salt Song budget as i was visiting my partners family.
    Secondly, the repeating slideshow you refer to was from my own images, shot by myself in Scarborough. I would not dream of using screensaver images from Apple Mac or elsewhere for any kind of audience, far less a paying one.
    Hope this clarifies these issues you have raised. Thanks.

    1. Thanks for your corrections. It must be frustrating, the inevitable misapprehensions that stem from the necessary lack of communication between creator and reviewer. I can write only from my own perspective of course, and do try to be clear that my opinions are just that, opinions, though in this case I should have been more clear (that is to say that I did not mean to imply that the images were not your own – rather that the execution of the slideshow reminded me of that particular screensaver). I hope you didn’t take anything I said personally; I certainly would never intend to be hurtful, or worse, libellous. I’ll add that I have never given anything unreserved praise because I don’t think it’s constructive or interesting, and whilst I try to be considerate of the feelings of the people whose work I critique, my forthright reviewing style can be interpreted as being more brutal than it is intended to be. I hope there are no hard feelings, and I would relish the opportunity to see more of your work in future.
      All the best,
      Ben

  2. I wonder if the reviewer was sat in the same audience as us? We were deeply moved by the story, and so were others.. I cried. The poetry, particularly, was beautiful, uplifting, soulful even – just putting across another ‘opinion’ 🙂

  3. Ben – EVERYTHING is personal. Good! So hearing back from the maker is a plus. I’ve suffered through various reviews at Temple Works and felt like slogging the effing bastard. I never did. Because their review – like yours – was from the heart. And so is Andy’s reply.

    Andy – it sounds wonderful – and I think Ben really really liked it.

    I know Ben. He cares greatly and just wants to make his ontological reservations clear.

    Susan

  4. Hey Ben, no worries, you are certainly entitled to your opinions and given that, it doesn’t feel appropriate to engage with them here. Your views are clearly as valid as my own. However the wording of the two claims i did choose to respond to, could be misread/misinterpreted by your audience and subsequently assumed to be facts (which they are not). It felt reasonable to counter them and make some attempt to protect my artistic integrity, especially when ‘budgets’ and ‘fee paying audiences’ start getting bandied around.

    I dont expect ‘unreserved praise’, i don’t have an opinion about your ‘forthright reviewing style’ and I’m not even bothered about ‘brutal’. But I am partial to a bit of accuracy. Hard feelings? None at all dude! Hope that’s clear and see you next time 😉

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